Basics¶
The following sections contain advice we follow at Siemens to create our own products and includes common writing errors to avoid when creating industrial products and experiences.
Style¶
- Use as few words as possible
- Use simple, specific, clear, and informative wording
- Use the same words and grammatical forms, lengths, and styles repeatedly
Tone and voice¶
- Use natural, conversational language and not robotic, funny, cool or clever
- Avoid to talk to the user directly on the UI
- Talk to users directly in formal contexts only (e.g., email bodies, app tour, …)
- Address users in second-person (you) and use first-person plural for the application (we) if direct communication is used
- Use gender-neutral language
- Use polite language
- Avoid 'please', 'sorry' and other forms of apology
- Use positive instead of negative framing
- Avoid using contractions in general
Dos | Don'ts |
---|---|
their, them, theirs, salesperson | his, hers, him, salesman |
Welcome to Building X | Hey there! |
Welcome Werner von Siemens | Hey there! |
X appears when detail view has selected events | X doesn't appear if detail view has no selected events |
cannot, will not | can't, won't |
you will, we have | you'll, we've |
Length¶
- Use sentences only when necessary
- Use short words (3, 4, or 5 letters) instead of long words (8 or longer)
- Use short, scannable segments, not paragraphs
- Keep sentences under 25 words (average = 15 words)
- Keep titles under 65 characters (including spaces)
- Use info icons only when necessary: Icons cannot contain the same content as the UI
Capitalization¶
- Capitalize the first letter of the first word in a title / sentence / tooltip / menu item / list item / button
- Do not use all-caps (e.g.,
PLANNING
→Planning
) - Capitalize proper nouns, i.e. places, organizations, tools, languages, products and things according the proper nouns chapter
- Capitalize named app functions and UI elements: Go to Settings, Allocate users in User management, Press OK
Dos | Don'ts |
---|---|
Go to Settings | Go To Settings |
Press OK | Press Ok |
Log in | LOG IN |
For more information, see Siemens Industry Online Support. | For more information, see Siemens industry online support. |
Common UX wording mistakes¶
The following table contains frequently discovered UX writing mistakes.
Dos | Don'ts |
---|---|
time zone | timezone |
log file | logfile |
log in (as an action) | login |
login (as a noun) | log in |
equipment | equipments |
feedback | feedbacks |
training | trainings |
current Avoid misunderstandings with current (electricity) | actual |
present If misunderstandings with current (electricity) are possible | actual |
avoid "shall" | user shall manage users |
Siemens has | Siemens have |
34 million / 35 billion | 34 / 35 |
34 million | 34 millions |
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